英語プロダクティブ ７月１１日授業のグループ・ワーク作品
課題 電子メールのやりとりを書く Exchanging
e-mails.
グループ１
(Message)
Dear Yuko:
Hi! How are you? About our trip in summer
vacation, I would suggest one plan. Why don't we go to Hokkaido?
I think it is cooler in Hokkaido and there are plenty of many delicious foods. My uncle lives in Sapporo
and we may be able to stay there.? What do you think? (How does it sound?の方が自然）Do you want to go anywhere else? Let me know hear your plan. Satoko
(Reply)
Dear Satoko:
Hi! I'm fine, thank you. Actually, By the way, in fact, summer in Hokkaido is hotter than you expect think. But I want to go either, too. I want to go to Otaru and see the glass
factory. I agree to stay with your uncle(→It sounds great if we could stay at your
uncle's place). I would suggest to eat all kinds of Ramen. Let's
talk about it at my house place tomorrow! Yuko
グループ２
(Message)
Dear Yutaro:
Hi! How are you? Summer vacation will come
soon. Do you have any plan? I'm planning
a trip with our friends. The members is are Yoko, Yuko, Mari, Shinobu, Yasuko, and Tom. Why don't you come join with us?
P.S.(追伸にする必要がない。本文に続ける）
We have not decided the distination. destination yet. But we want to go swimming anywhere in the sea. Please tell me your opinion. Keiko
(Reply)
Dear Keiko:
Thank you. I don't have any plan in summer
vacation. I really want to join your plan.
Talking of the sea, I think Okinawa is would be the best place. The sea is beautiful. I'm
looking forward to the trip. Please say hello
to our trips members. Bye! Yutaro
グループ３
(Message)
Dear Tom:
Hi! How are you? It gets hotter in Japan.
You are in summer vacation, aren't you? I have still few days to go have school. I had some exams. It is difficult for me
to take exams in Japanese. So I tried to
cheat at exams. I was sure that cheating didn't come out. I didn't expect that I would be caught cheating
on exams but I did. But it did. I'm very upset. I freaked out! (upsetはangry の意味で使う。「パニッくった」というような口語的な意味でfreak
outを使うと良い）What should I do? How do you think? Hope
to hear from you soon. John.
(Reply)
Dear John:
That's too bad. Cheer up! Don't worry. I
did the same. But I tempted corrupted the teacher with a bribe, then it worked. He allowed generous than Americans. Good luck! Tom
グループ４
(Message)
Dear Mary:
Hi! How are you? I'm fine. Today I went to
the movie "Terminator 3." I like
this movie series this series of movies and I saw "Terminator" and "Terminator
2."before. Arnold Schwarzeneger is so wonderful and
cool. Have you already seen this movie? I
like action movies. Please tell me what kind
of movies do you like. Hope to hear from you soon. Jane
(Reply)
Dear Jane:
Hi! I'm fine, too. I have not seen "Terminator
3" yet. Actually I didn't see any of the Terminator series, because I don't like
action movies so much. I like Chinese movies.
A few days ago I saw "Hatsukoi no kitamichi."
It's a pure love story. If you like love
stories, I recommend you to see this movie.
Talk to you soon! Mary
グループ５
(Message)
Dear Hanako:
Hi! Thank you so much for lending me your
notes. It really helped me and I got A+ in
that exam test. I don't know how to thank you. Hey, I've
got two tickets of the consert concert this weekend, so would you like to go with me?(←より穏やかに誘う表現として I thought
you might want to go. を使ってもよい） I think it'll be a great consert concert and I'm sure I heard you would really like this musician. Hope to hear
from you soon! Best wishes. Taro
(Reply)
Dear Taro:
Thank you for your invitation. I really want
to go with you(またはI'd love to go), but I have been busy since last week.
To tell the truth,（不要） I have no classroom exams tests but have to hand in ten papers reports by next Monday. No way!! But if you could would help me, maybe I could go with you... How
about it does it sound? With best regards, Hanako
グループ６
(Message)
Hi! The day you will come to Japan is coming soon drawing near. I have been looking forward to seeing you!
I remember you said You say, you would like to go to Kyoto and see various
traditional buildings. Where do you want
to go(またはDo you have any particular place in your
mind)? What time will you arrive at the Kansai airport? I'll pick you up there.
Hope to hear from you soon. Seiji
P.S.
Don't forget to bring some souvenirs, HA! HA!("Ha"は「ふん、ほら、へえ」といったニュアンス、ここではJust
kiddingぐらいがいいのでは）
(Reply)
Dear Seiji:
Hi. I want to visit the Kinkaku temple. But I don't know well about am not familiar with Kyoto, so please guide me around the city I follow you. I'd like to have Japanese traditional food.
Oh, my father asked me to buy a Japanese
sword. Can I get it? Just joking! HA! HA! HA! I'lll arrive at the airport at 12:15. I
want to meet you as soon as possible. (←最後の文章が今ひとつ意味不明だが、あとのと合わせて See
you there. くらいでいいのでは）See you! Cathy
（総評）
7月11日の最後の授業中に書いてもらった英作文の添削例を上に載せた。電子メールではかならずしも文法に拘る必要もないが、あえて添削した箇所もある。学生がよく間違えるポイント（間接話法、eとiのスペルミス、単数・複数など）が含まれているので見なおしてほしい。
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